Wow!! this Poem is really very nice and sweet and it really feels that all this is coming from your heart and anyone will fall in love with it anytime. happy writing!!
This last lines remind me of the time when I used to figure out what the hymn 'Lose yourself in me' meant. This one was a brain twisting exercise quite similar to that. A fluffy comment, I know, but kya karen. A few more lines about how the air felt against you was something I got curious to know, I'm thinking fresh and crisp, but it's your call Miss Poet, your lines..
THank you so much Sappy.. you have a way of bringing a flash grin on my face..keep visiting Girl.:)
Phantom..hey..thanks..it's amazing the way u can see the layers within.. each one has a different way of looking at a text/situation..that's what i wish to understand..thanks..:)
Thanks Sweetheart..come more often Vishi n yeah.. next time temme abt ur reflections too. :)
Ann..yeah.. thanks for reminding that one..reminds me of the times we used to go for mass early morn.. the air flow..sure..will describe that one soon... Thanks Angel..keep visiting hoME :)
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happy writing!!
Your work always has layers within. Liked it a lot :).
"Swaraanjali ho tum, jise gaaya hai,
Uttam rang samuh, jo man bhaaya hai,
Ibaadad hai yeh, nahi maaya hai,
Kho kar khud ko, tumhe paaya hai !!"
Phantom..hey..thanks..it's amazing the way u can see the layers within..
each one has a different way of looking at a text/situation..that's what i wish to understand..thanks..:)
Thanks Sweetheart..come more often Vishi n yeah.. next time temme abt ur reflections too. :)
Ann..yeah.. thanks for reminding that one..reminds me of the times we used to go for mass early morn..
the air flow..sure..will describe that one soon...
Thanks Angel..keep visiting hoME :)
But just one question: Who's it for?
for someone special?
Tang, sometimes words can't measure expression na.. ^~^
Meant for a reflection I reflected on :D