Craziness redefined
@ the zenith of Life
red says blue
& I'm still the calm
though left a trail..
n thoughts unclear
why seek an answer
you never asked?
Why think a thought
that never was..
smell the coffee
flick the alarm
fine tune the ray
GN says dawn...
red says blue
& I'm still the calm
chasing a dream
that never was realthough left a trail..
n thoughts unclear
why seek an answer
you never asked?
Why think a thought
that never was..
smell the coffee
flick the alarm
fine tune the ray
GN says dawn...
Comments
i really have a way with words.
so whats the title?
I agree..U really have a way with words..n so I eagerly await ur blogposts :D
what do You think it should be..
i meant
u really have a way with words
god! this will teach me to read my comments carefully before i post!!
PS: seeing that u have already replied my comment i m not gonna delete it. hence this comment with my sincere apologies.
N hey..i realized what u meant..just wanted to pull ur leg..though actually meaning every word of what i said ..Cheerz..
btw...if i ever recall my disastrous bloopers..will post em..n we could have a laugh ... :P
What do you think the title should be...ur perspective..
i can only admire ur poetic skills.
Read http://thenightwhispers.blogspot.com/2008/12/tangy-rhyme.html
after reading, i m sure u wil realise that ur poem is better off without a title than one from me!
:P
i cannot bear to spoil the beauty of ur poem by suggesting sumthing gyanless
I simply love the way U narrate an incident n express ur self
& regd that poem...
lol...I loved ur poetic sensa Humor..
we want more!!!!
;P
That aside, a poem worth reflecting on! Keep up the good work!
:)
P.S. Is the title something in morse code? A little clue perhaps?
:P
hmm..yeah..Ur rite though..made this poem as I was traveling..I was SMSing my friend then ;P